New Picture for My 3 Sisters: Whaddya think?

Well, I have composed a new picture for our blog/website... I think.  I like the original pen and ink sketch that I did to get a layout for the proposed picture.. but I haven't like any of the finished products.... yet.  I posted this one to get a feel for it, and to see if I am my own worst critic.  So let me know what you all think, please!  I may just end up using the pen and ink drawing, in the end!